Winner 55 Word Challenge
Week 13
Honorable Mentions:
@michelawalters I like the detail that went into this, his weight, his breathing, the obsessive love along with verbal abuse and then the unknown…ready to do what was necessary. I wasn’t sure if she was going to slit his throat or cut a little lower.
@tollykit This story was delicious, in more ways than one. I wasn’t sure if the wolf was the betrayer or the weapon used to kill the betrayer, but the last line cinched this one for Honorable mention.
@J_M_Blackman I loved the twist at the end of this story. A unique way to ensure faithfulness and it would seem, leave the other party aware, at least momentarily.
And the Winner is…
@MLGammella The setup was perfect. What I liked was how she let him think everything was okay, only to let him have it in the end. Here’s her story.
Bloody Reunion
He thought the heat from my skin was passion. He thought the tension in my body was from pleasure. He thought he knew me.
He didn’t.
He also didn’t know I saw him with my sister. He’d come tonight, but for the last time. I’d get my revenge with his blood flowing across my hands.
@MLGammella
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